Experience of my learn english
Hi ,my name is he xiang bo ,you can call me Bobo .Today I'm very happy to be here and make a lot of friend ,they all love english just like me .my english was very poor in last year ,bucause I never learn english when I was junior scholl, I tried many time to improve my poor english ,but I always failed .when I was three grade in senior school,Oneday I asked myself what I was going to do ? finally ,I decided to tryed the last once ,if I failed,I wii never to learn it forever .since that day I work hard to read book and recite word ,I wii never forget the day that my english teacher asked a question in the classroom ,The qusetion is what is the write's main purpose of writing the story?None knewe the answer,I was so excited because I spent two hours to get the answer.The story depicted a man who has get cancer but finally he overcome the cancer,in the end he say "your choice change your life". when I was asked the quetion .I speak out "your choice change your life " at that moment I knew I become another person ,I told myself I MUST speak good english .I swear .since that day I'm crazy about english ."your choice change your life "become my motto , I will try my best to improve my english ,thank you I feel your english is very great. we can learn it together.:qq50] Nice to meet you,Your motto is mine also [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=255741&ptid=117485]1#[/url] [i]何泉[/i] [/b]
You have had a good show-off,but maybe you should notice some of your spelling mistakes.Hope you get them corrected.Anyway you are great that i feel . There are some mistakes.
1.my english was very poor (no in) last year !
2. I (have) tried many time(s) to improve my poor english .
3.when I was three grade(in Grade 3) in senior school,Oneday I asked myself what I was going to do ? (.)
4.I decided to tryed the last once(confused!) ,if I failed,I wii never to(no to) learn it forever
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you should learn much harder,especially your grammer!
Best wishes! Yes, your spirit is valuable. :victory:
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