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Vivien.. 发表于 2011-1-24 09:33

Self-Introduction

[i=s] 本帖最后由 areyouready 于 2011-1-24 20:13 编辑 [/i]

[size=4][color=teal]Hello  everyone,I'm new here .My name is Vivien,I'm (a) university student ,my (majoy) is business English so I want to learn English well in order to find a job .I hope we can help each other,:loveliness:   thank you![/color][/size]

areyouready 发表于 2011-1-24 20:16

[b]回复 [url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=289011&ptid=133293]1#[/url] [i]Vivien..[/i] [/b]


    I have found two of your spelling mistakes which you should revise.Anyway welcome you here and make friends with us.

Vivien.. 发表于 2011-1-24 21:14

Thank  you for you to find my fault. I know one of my mistakes is the " a".but I do not  know where is  the other. Do you mean the "major"?  I think it's right . please tell me thank you::handshake

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