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bonnieju 发表于 2011-4-25 10:41

Practise Writing in English[2011.4.25]网络游戏

[size=4][color=darkred]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=darkred]  1)现在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏,家长和学校对此忧心忡忡[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=darkred]  2)但有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=darkred]  3)你对此的看法是……[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=blue]【思路点拨】[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=blue]  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出对于某问题的一种反面看法,提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=blue]  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题,阐述家长和老师对该问题的否定态度和他们的担忧;指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度,并阐述网络游戏的好处;表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=red]参考范文[/color][/size]
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[size=4]  [color=magenta]Online Games[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=magenta]  As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=magenta]  However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=magenta]  From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.[/color][/size]
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