Practise Writing in English[2011.5.6]保护环境是我们的义务
[size=4]题目：请以”It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。[/size][size=4][/size]
[size=4][color=blue]It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment[/color][/size]
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[size=4] [/size][size=4] [color=darkred] It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=darkred] But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.[/color][/size]
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[color=darkred][size=4] [/size][size=4] Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.[/size][/color]
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[size=4][color=red]范文翻译参考回复可见：[/color][/size]
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[size=4] [color=magenta]点评：作者多用学过的词语，不但保证了正确，还巩固了所学的知识，并且注意句型的多样化，如长句、短句、疑问句，使用了“if，so，now，but”等词，整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上，写文章就像串珠子，连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=indigo]议论文常用的句型有：[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo]1、论点：[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] Computer is important.[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] We must learn English well.[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] It's very important for us to...[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] In my opinion...[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=indigo]2、论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅、紧凑。如：[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Lastly, ... Above all, ... 等。[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=indigo]3、结尾强调观点，最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点，如：[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] So we must...[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] So it's very important for us to...[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] I believe...[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=indigo] We should...[/color][/size] :qq88] :qq49] [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=367571&ptid=172804]1#[/url] [i]bonnieju[/i] [/b] It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.
But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.
Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.
保护环境是我们的职责。我们在哪里生活？地球上。地球是我们唯一生存的所在，所以我们知道保护环境的重要性。但是现在，有些人在破坏我们的环境，比如滥砍滥伐，在公共场所乱涂乱画，乱倒垃圾。如果我们还在这样做，后果将会很糟糕。现在，是时候呼吁社会上的人来保护环境了，这是我们的职责。改善环境需要我们每个人的贡献，我们应该使我们的环境越来越漂亮。 It seems to be a serious problem for us to protect th environment. It our duty to protect out environment
we have note that the environment around us become worse .we can hardly to smell fresh air because the factory exhaust polluted gas. we can hardly eat clean water,because the reiver will no longer liquid. there are a lot of similar case need our attention.
what i want to say is we need protect our environment form now on,otherwise, the people will be published by the nature in the near future. :) :)
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