A call from home
today I receive a call from home,to hand the stuff which I need to me my parents have tried all the ways to help me .I am so moved .Especially when I hear my mather say that father can bring it to the city where I stay. You know ,my father has been over 53 and he has never take train since he was 20s.Finally,I don't have the heart to let he come. If you have time,go home and bring it back. [i=s] 本帖最后由 xiaomeixin 于 2011-5-10 15:41 编辑 [/i]We all ought to love my [color=red](our 要与主语相对应)[/color]parents.
Spend many time to accompany them. [i=s] 本帖最后由 xiaomeixin 于 2011-5-10 15:42 编辑 [/i]
Yes ,parents are the greatest person in the world,they give you something to eat when you [color=red]are (这里应加are比较合适)[/color]hungry,they give you love when you need love.Everything they do for us is for the same goal ,that is ,they just want their children to be good. 想问一下上面修改的红字部分是谁改的啊:) Check before hand in I'm very agree with dawn's view.Parents love their children are similar in the world.They always hope their children to become better and better. moved I love my parents. loving our parents! Remember our parents love for us,and let them know we love them too so parents are angle thanks for sharing !!!!!!!! pathetic parents heart!
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