who can point out the mistake to us?
[color=black]for instance， i make a sentence which[/color] [font=Arial][color=black]put a foot wrong ，such as grammar，sentence pattern，the tense and so on。if we couldnot correct it， there are no progress· to us，just like me who have a
terrible english，i am anxious for improving myself. Do you agree with me or who can help me?[/color][/font] :qq70] i make a sentence which put a foot wrong .这句话有问题，我不是很理解你要表达的意思是什么，你是要表达“我造句的时候会出现错误”还是“我所造的句子有点错误”，不是很清楚，而且，which所引导的定语成句，如果是在你这个句子上的话，那么a sentence 在这里相当于第三人称单数形式所以which后面的谓语put要加s，再说which用在这里不是很合适，因为我觉得你是想表达，“我所造出来的句子有点错误”，I made a mistake in this sentence written by myself. 我觉得这样翻译比较好，你觉得呢？
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thanks a lot.:loveliness: you are right.it's my fault.
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it doesn't matter . but you have to pay attention to these and check it when you have finished writing a sentence.:qq50] {:7_283:}ok，thank you again
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