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Hesper 发表于 2011-8-21 11:22

hello ever one

Hello every one
I'm Hesper and come from Hei Longjiang,I hope to speak fluently english in order to I can find a good job,but I‘m english is very poor.I will further my study,I'd like here very much.I hope you can help me,Thank you very much.:)

酸奶女米亚 发表于 2011-8-21 15:27

Hi,Hesper.Welcome !

tingroom 发表于 2011-8-22 10:01

we are willing to help you.

M_CARL 发表于 2011-8-22 14:08

I'd love to help you too!Please allow me to correct several mistakes you've made.
1.[color=Red]in order toI can find a good job,[/color]
2.but [color=Red]I‘m english [/color]is very poor
3.[color=Red]I'd like here very much.   [/color]

1.in order to do sth or you can say in order that...
2.you can say "I'm not good at English"
3. you can say"I'd love to study here"

Come on!We will help you!

李武军 发表于 2011-8-23 07:23

let' s help each other. the tingroom is a family.

Hesper 发表于 2011-8-31 08:21

[b]回复 [url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=437878&ptid=207027]4#[/url] [i]M_CARL[/i] [/b]


    Thank you very much for all you help

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