请帮我修改一下,thanks
be politeA man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ;Give me some water ,I need some food ......
The God go crark and nothing to give him.You must first said 'please' the God said .
The man said again;'please give some water ,some food.......The God give him some food . Then the
man begined to eat . the God go louder roar,Why ?said the man .Because you didn't say thank you.
let 's be polite to say thank and please in everything. :) Let me have a try.
be polite
A man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ,"Give me some water and some food ...... "
The God went by and gave him nothing."You must first say 'please' "the God said .
The man said again,please give me some water ,some food......."The God gave him some food . Then the man begined to eat . the God went by and roared,:Why ?"said the man ."Because you didn't say thank you."
let 's be polite to say thank s and please on everything.
谢谢
上帝给他一个响雷.............上帝给他一个闪电..........怎么译呢?:) :) what you get is living, what you give is a life.Thanks!
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