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fielding 发表于 2012-5-16 14:32

Need suggestions

The objective of my resume:


[font=Arial][size=11.0pt]A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier. And then,he tried to be an accountant. At 2004, He got his first job in Changfa Refrigeration Company as a storage accountant. With his strong learning ability and so much efforts, he promoted step-by-step ,and finally became an account officer after four years when he left. And now, another four years later, he was in charge of whole financial business of a domestic investment company. At the same time, he encountered the bottleneck of occupation. And he would like to [/size][/font][font=Arial][size=10.5pt]attempt to new opportunities and challenges in foreign companies.[/size][/font][font=Arial][size=11.0pt] He prefers doing a challenging work rather than boring one![/size][/font]


I need suggestions to improve it and find mistakes. Thanks

wengler 发表于 2012-5-17 14:12

A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier.

不是很明白,能不能告诉我你想说什么?

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