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leyla 发表于 2012-7-10 16:27

看看高手搏人眼球的英文感谢信

看看高手搏人眼球的英文感谢信 [img]http://cnak2.englishtown.com/_imgs/seo/thankyou2.jpg[/img]
[size=4][color=red]找工作的时候光写cover letter?凹凸啦!有一种[b]英文感谢信[/b]叫做follow up letter,是在工作面试以后写给面试官,感谢对方提供面试机会,同时也为自己博得更多注意力。 [/color][/size]

[size=4][color=red]Dear Mr./Ms. Last Name: 亲爱的XX先生、女士:

I very much enjoyed speaking with you about the opportunity to work with your company in the role of sales executive. My experience in sales and management seem to be a good match for the position you described. The organization of your sales teams is forward thinking, and I believe, one where I could contribute a great deal.
高手的感谢信有两个特点:呼之欲出的诚意,和略谦虚的自卖自夸。第一段谢过面试官后急速开始自我推荐,说到自己曾经的经历和公司相当切合。

I bring with me to the position an extensive knowledge of the market, and strong communications skills. In addition, my ability to motivate my team while working within our budget will provide your company with an edge over others in the market.
第二段承接第一段继续讲自己和应征岗位的切合点。

My presentation skills allow me to communicate effectively with directors, as well as keep my team up to date on our progress. During my interview, I neglected to mention the series of classes I took in public speaking at the local University. It was very interesting, and provided me with the confidence I possess now while organizing and presenting a project.
亮点出现在第三段。面试的时候表现得好还不算,在感谢信中还要厚脸皮再拎出来说一说,还要展开说一说,可见心机有多重!(但是真的有效呢……对方会一下子想起来,噢,这就是那个很会说话的人!)

Thank you for taking the time to speak with me. If you have any additional questions, please feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you about this position.
高手就是能伸能缩,最后一段把收回来,继续感谢,不尽滴感谢……

Best Regards,
Your Name

看到了高手的英文感谢信,是不是给你也加了一点信心呢?记住要点了吗?呼之欲出的诚意和略谦虚的自卖自夸。 [/color][/size]

tingroom 发表于 2012-7-11 16:48

国内现在有写面试感谢信的么?

leyla 发表于 2012-7-11 18:53

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    嘿嘿 你应该比我清楚些 我觉得写了好些 不过我不喜欢写这样的

簿子酒 发表于 2012-7-12 08:08

{:7_251:}no idea..

薇生物 发表于 2012-8-31 09:37

不会说话
PS:中英文颜色换成不同的,这样全都红通通的,刺眼,不好看。中文可以改成蓝色的

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