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天空之枫 发表于 2010-2-1 18:28

中国人最喜欢犯的中国式英语表达 二

Have you ever made such mistakes ?come and practise to express in the right.

1.我没有男朋友。I have no boyfriend.
[b]I don’t have a boyfriend. [/b]
2 他的身体很健康。His body is healthy.
[b]He is in good health. [/b]You can also say:[b] He’s healthy.[/b]

3. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。The price is too expensive/cheap.
[b]The price is too high/ rather low.[/b]


4. 我们下了车。We got off the car.
[b]We got out of the car.[/b]

5. 车速快了。The speed of the car is fast.
[b]The car is speeding. Or “The car is going too fast.”
[/b]
6. 这个春节你回家吗?
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival?
是的,我回去。Of course! (这一句是错的)
[b]当然。Sure. / Certainly.(这种说法是正确的)
[/b]以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多,只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是“当然我知道啦!难道我是一个傻瓜吗?”因此,of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时,用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时,of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not.

7. 我觉得右手很疼。I feel very painful in my right hand.
[b]My right hand is very painful. Or “ My right hand hurts(aches).”
[/b]
8. 他看到她很惊讶。He looked at her and felt surprised.
[b]He looked at her in surprise.[/b]

9. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young.
[b]After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older.
[/b]
10. 她脸红了,让我看穿了她的心思。
Her red face made me see through her mind.
[b]Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking.[/b]

11. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood.
[b]Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood.
[/b]
12. 别理她。Don't pay attention to her.
[b]Leave her alone.[/b]

13. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。
I get a lot of knowledge in the university.
[b]I learned a lot in university.[/b]

14. 黄山正在读书。
Samuel is reading a book.
[b]Samuel is reading.[/b]


15. 我遇到了很多困难。
I am having many difficulties.
[b]I am having a few problems / lots of problems.[/b]

16. 请快点走,否则我们会迟到的。
Please hurry to walk or we'll be late.
[b]Please hurry up or we'll be late.[/b]

17. 她由嫉妒转向失望。
She was so jealous that she became desperate.
[b]Jealousy drove her to despair.[/b]

簿子酒 发表于 2010-2-1 23:30

She was so jealous that she became desperate.

Drow 发表于 2010-2-1 23:48

Good job,man.

lystone 发表于 2010-2-2 11:37

"交流中清楚表达自己避免chinglish"
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Although this is an old topic, I think they have something in common.

fine 发表于 2010-2-6 22:37

学习了。 改正中国式英文

5shiYimy 发表于 2010-2-7 14:55

嗯 Thanks a lot!

yoyo530521 发表于 2010-2-7 18:55

有个中式口语纠错的英语教程,喜欢的看看。
[url]http://www.tingroom.com/lesson/zhongshikouyujiucuo/[/url]

ck3891 发表于 2010-2-20 17:46

thank you~get it~

bxmzmx 发表于 2010-2-22 22:00

oh,it's very well.thank you!

Lari 发表于 2010-2-28 19:21

oh my God   我有这些错误  
thank you

猫咪 发表于 2010-3-1 10:22

老外喜欢用名词作主语,极少使用人称代词,来简化表达。

halo 发表于 2010-3-2 08:23

would you like to show us some examples?:qq75]

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