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Dabria 发表于 2012-8-19 22:49

My life

[i=s] 本帖最后由 Dabria 于 2012-8-19 22:53 编辑 [/i]

[attach]14177[/attach]Hello, everyone, this is my first time play this web,  I saw a number of person plaied this  website，haaaaa. and  hereafter I' ll write some things about me show everyone , I hope everybody can tell me  mistake. thank you ,becuase I 'm a beginner. thank you a lot!:victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory:

Dabria 发表于 2012-8-19 22:50

期待大家的回复  多多指点错误吧

AllenHL 发表于 2012-8-20 09:39

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城南小巷 发表于 2012-8-20 10:26

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studish 发表于 2012-8-20 10:44

"saw" should change "see"

Andy-Lee 发表于 2012-8-20 13:40

very good and you are beautiful.

心魔作祟 发表于 2012-8-20 21:12

Beatifull girl you are!
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welcome to join us !

kobe 发表于 2012-8-21 08:03

:qq69]you have a charming smile

簿子酒 发表于 2012-8-21 11:26

{:7_283:}welcome to join us

leo123 发表于 2012-8-22 09:09

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cjp00000 发表于 2012-8-22 13:32

[i=s] 本帖最后由 cjp00000 于 2012-8-22 13:38 编辑 [/i]

:qq49]First, welcome to join us, then I think you have made a mistake about "play" in preceding part of the text you wrote, I think you should say "played" not "plaied".

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