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梦幻的彩虹 发表于 2010-5-25 20:24

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[font=Times New Roman][color=#000000]You should
have
good habits about study English . Such
as aloudy speak Eglish in morning
and listen to Eglish song . If you
are
free ,you speak Eglish
more than the past
.If you want to study Engilsh with
ralexed ,you will watch Wnglish TV or film, which can add to English words in your mind .You need comfident and don’t afraid to make mistakes . you must spoeak and do more than the ast [/color][/font]
[color=#000000]I hopoe
you that you so pormove your English with my advice[/color]

sioco 发表于 2010-5-26 07:29

看完了，想干吗？

红星帝国 发表于 2010-6-23 01:33

study应使用studying
aloudy应使用loudly
song应使用songs
If you are free ,you speak Eglish more than the past句意不明
with ralexed 应换成名词
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凉茶 发表于 2010-6-29 16:33

what's"pormove"?I'don't know

shua 发表于 2010-7-6 20:19

这是很好的改错题

liuyong_1984 发表于 2010-7-7 23:24

study----studying
speak----speaking
If you are free----If you have spare time (not necessary)
you speak English more than the past----with out 'the'
(The grammar of this sentence is correct, but the meaning may be a little bit misunderstanding)
I will write: you should speak English as more as possible than before.
What is the meaning of "Wnglish", or maybe it is "English"?
comfident----confident
Here is some grammatical mistakes.
You need be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes.
Next spelling mistake is "ast", maybe you want to say "past".
The last sentence, I guess that you want to say.
I hope that you will improve your English with my advice.
above, just some suggestion of mine...

倾城之恋 发表于 2010-7-12 21:44

you can watch Wnglish TV or film

3380134 发表于 2010-9-5 19:26

The wrong ways had been found ,you just to revise and understand it.

菠萝吹雪 发表于 2010-9-10 06:05

^_^，我不说话，嘿嘿！！找个板凳坐到  围观 ^_^！！！！！！！

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