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annespring 发表于 2010-7-28 12:33

Self-introduction

[color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=10.5pt]Hello,everyone! I'm new here. I'd like to introduce myself. My name is Darcy. And I'm a boy which born in 1985,[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=10.5pt]I enjoy learning English[/size]. But my Spoken English are not very well. I'm glad to make friends with all of you and we can learn it together![/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]I like listing to musics,watching TV and playing table tennis.[/font][/color]
[size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman][color=#000000]Also i'll very pleased if you correct my mistakes. Thank you very much![/color][/font][/size]
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areyouready 发表于 2010-8-6 19:41

music 是不可数名词,不能加s.i'llvery pleased...i'll后面少了系动词be.:) please notice

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