【作文练习1】How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine’s Day?
[i=s] 本帖最后由 快乐小婷 于 2010-8-22 15:14 编辑 [/i][img]http://my.tingroom.com/attachment/201008/12/170391_12816207814wMt.gif[/img]
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[/size][/font][font=黑体][size=9pt][size=4][color=red]情人节就快到了！所以，本期主题就是她了：[/color][/size]
[color=red][color=red][color=red][size=5][color=red]How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine's Day?[/color][/size][/color][/color][/color][/size][/font][/align]
[align=left][font=黑体][color=#ff0000][/color][/font][/align][align=left][font=楷体_GB2312][size=9pt][size=4][color=#000000]:qq53] 祝各位情人节快乐[/color][/size][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=黑体][size=9pt][color=red][color=red][color=red][size=4][color=red][/color][/size][/color][/color][/color][/size][/font][/align][align=left][font=黑体][size=9pt][color=red][color=red][color=red][size=4][color=red][/color][/size][/color][/color][/color][/size][/font][/align] ah,I think this's day different of the others
i didn't spend that day. [i=s] 本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-8-14 10:23 编辑 [/i]
[b][url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=182785&ptid=80207]2#[/url] [i]crystal_09[/i] [/b]
That day is really special ,it not only makes the lovers sweeter than ever, but also makes more the lovers:qq88]
So don't worry, maybe a boy will bravely bare his heart to you :loveliness:
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ah,I think this's day different of[color=red](from)[/color] the others
i didn't[color=red] (won't 可能用将来时会好点哟）[/color]spend that day. you can keep a diary in English every day . I think you can improve your writing. [i=s] 本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-8-14 12:41 编辑 [/i]
[b][url=http://bbs.tingroom.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=183375&ptid=80207]4#[/url] [i]谢[/i] [/b]
Thanks for your advice, and I think your writng is good.
if you'd like to have a try at this topic, that would be better.
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