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无指针 发表于 2007-4-6 16:31

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     One day morning,my teather gave us a film about ocean to
see,resulting so many ideals occured in my mind.The ocean world
is very colourful and substantial,but we just know only a little
about it. That let me feel natual scence requires our whole life,
the whole human being`s life.  And even if we have two live to give,there would not be enough.
    There are so many fish living in the ocean,in a busy life.
At that time,I wish I could have swum deeply into the sea
through different fish,touching them ,make friends wish them,solving problems for them.
    They live in a complicated chain;the bigger eats the smaller.They just do whatever they want to,never thinking much
about others;only the stronger can live with their will;nobody can make them feel anything.
    I hope I can do whatever I want to, never worrying much about
the result,just try my best.If I start something good, I hope I  would not look back,just go as the same.Just as the good saying goes
"Do not cross your brige before you came to them" "All things in
their being are good for something " They are age-old adages,but
they are time tested and still hold true;I belive in them.I will
do nothing halves forever.
    They know they maybe die someday,even today,but they are optimistic.They move about freely in the ocean,embracing the sea, enjoying their life. I admire them for their attitude.They
do not need to watch out for things to go wrong.Things usual go just fine.They do not have to waste their energy to worry about anything.The sky would not fall in ;things will be okay.
    Whatever tomorrow will be ,today is a good day,and belong to
everyone,old and young,big and small.They know there are too many
things we can not avoid,what they can do is facing them calmly and
optimisticly.
    I always have a dream I can face the whole of my life calm,
conscientious, postive and let no grass grow under my feet.But I
have not gone to it.Like many people, I have flashed up sometimes, but few days later ,I lost heart like a balloon. So many times,I went up and down ;so many times,I was at the point of giving up;so many times,I regretted my rotten day,and all so I always encouraged myself cheerring up,but sometimes that did nothing.
     As we know man love life and life enrichs man.Life is fragile ;youth is short,and yesterday has lost its meaning ;we should learn to forget;to owe today and enjoy today.Now that we set sail,we should ding to the life full of passions,full of hopes as if a brook runs into the sea.
    We are man ,not fish.We have a lot of things to do ,and whatever we do,we should meet with trouble.But what I want to say is that "Kenn-witted and capable sailors are not trained on calm lakes;comfortable life cannot create great figures of the age ;a man without sorrow and anxiety in life wiil never grow into manhood. So I think we should go beyoned our plain self and struggle bravely against the stormy waves in our life and hack
our way throught the jungle.The field of activty is vast with brilliant prospects where much can be accomplished.I hope all that a man do ,do with your might.
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无指针 发表于 2007-4-6 16:35

这是我写的英语,希望大家给指出点不足,本人心理素质好,有话就说,没关系啊.

simonpapers 发表于 2007-4-7 12:48

a good job ,thank you !

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