12月10日诗文赏析：IF 诗文, 赏析

youxiaxiaolala

read the poem carefully and then  translate it or write  down your feeling to gain the score

            If I could save time in a bottle

　　the first thing that I'd like to do

　　is to save every day until eternity passes away

　　just to spend them with you

　　If I could make days last forever

　　if words could make wishes come true

　　I'd save every day like a treasure and then

      again I would spend them with you

　　

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litianpei01

如果我能把时间保留在一个瓶子里，那么我要做的第一件事就是保留住每一天直到来世来生，只为和你分享；
如果我能让日子永远延续，又或许我的那些话能让愿望成真，我将珍惜如财富的每一天，然后和你一起分享。

xiaomeixin

If I could save time in a bottle
如果我可以把时间乘在瓶子里
the first thing that I'd like to do
我首先会做的事
is to save every day until eternity passes away
节省每一天直到永恒
just to spend them with you
只与你在一起
If I could make days last forever
如果我可以把时间化作永恒
if words could make wishes come true
如果我的愿望能一一成真
I'd save every day like a treasure and then
我把那每一天都视如财富，然后
again I would spend them with you
我会再一次与你分享