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高考英语作文写作如何让句子“靓”起来

高考英语书面表达高分作文已不局限于把话说清楚,把意思表达完整,而是要让文章的句子表达得更加地道,流畅,因此要想取得作文高分,我们要善于灵活运用高级句式、句型,熟练掌握润色句子的技能,让我们的文章靓起来。如何让我们的文章靓起来呢?很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这仅限制在词汇层面上,更重要的是我们要灵活运用那些经典的句式。通过对低级句型的改变,可以达到语言优美这一目的。

  ◆感叹句:通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛,凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此转换。

  How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.

  ◆强调句:可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。

  It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag in the classroom.
  It was then that I realized the importance of English.

  ◆倒装句:只要句中有介词短语或状语从句,便可将其提前,变成倒装句。

  Only when I turned the right at the crossing did that car ran towards me.
  Only by this means can he escaped from the big fire.

  ◆with的复合结构:可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with复合结构。

  With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
  He always likes to sleep with the windows open.

  ◆巧妙地使用非谓语动词:可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。

  Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低级形式:When he heard that, ……)

  ◆恰到好处的被动句:适合应用于较简短的句子,这样显得语言简洁生动,宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。

  After searching all my pockets, but nothing was found。

  ◆高级定语从句:若定语从句中的动词带有介词,只需将介词移至先行词后。

  We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.

  ◆进行时态:有时会含有一定情绪,尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。

  I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.

  ◆婉转表达:需要使用幽默的技巧,主要用于漫画型作文题。

  I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned  home  learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.

  ◆what引导的名词性从句:将动宾结构转化为此结构。

  What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.

  ◆“数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。

  As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests.

  ◆适当加一些插入语:一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语,如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, what’s more等,有时可以考虑几个插入语连用,就更像英美人士的文章了。

  ◆独立主格:将主从句去掉连词,前句动词变为分词即可。

  The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

  ◆把简单句改成复合句:适当的时候把两个简单句改成“too….to…”或者“so…that…”等高级一点的复合句。例如:

  I was very tired. I couldn’t keep up with them.

  可以改成:I was so tired that I couldn’t keep up with them.

  或:I was too tired to keep up with them.

  待你掌握了这些实用的句式,让句子靓起来便不再难,只要你坚持运用,相信孰能生巧,高考中就可以取得满意的成绩!

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