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第二天：
（I）说明原因型
模块（2）
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).
The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there
comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially
when ( 6 ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind
people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like
( 8 ).
The impact of Television
In recent years , with the development of science and
technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite
TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated
debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many
parents are worried about the impact of so much television
on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in
television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so
many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much
exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some
studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions
of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover , ( the effect on children's minds are more serious than
the effect on children's bodies ) . Especially when ( the children
are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind
parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities
for supervising their children's TV viewing ).In this way ,children
will not be influented too deeply .
（I）说明原因型
模块（3）
Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate
the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,
your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ).
Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ) .You donn't have to
look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5 ) .
It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 7 ).
注释：
1 ： XX的第一个优点
2： 支持XX的做法
3：不支持XX的做法
4：XX的第二个优点
5：举例证明优点二
6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .
This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable
than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities ).
If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary,
if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .
You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound
influence upon ( the achievement of one's ambitions ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will). |
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发表于 2007-3-26 15:21
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