请帮我修改一下,thanks thanks

呀呀

be  polite
A man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ;Give me some water ,I need some  food ......
The God go crark and nothing  to give  him.You must first said 'please' the God said .
The man said again;'please give some water ,some food.......The God give him some food . Then the  
man  begined to eat . the God go louder roar,Why ?said the  man .Because you didn't say thank you.
let 's be polite to say  thank and please in everything.

jinyanlina

Let  me have a try.
be  polite
A man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ,"Give me some water and some  food ...... "
The God went by and  gave  him nothing."You must first say 'please' "the God said .
The man said again,please give me some water ,some food......."The God gave him some food . Then the  man  begined to eat . the God went by  and roared,:Why ?"said the  man ."Because you didn't say thank you."
let 's be polite to say  thank s and please on everything.

呀呀

上帝给他一个响雷.............上帝给他一个闪电..........怎么译呢?

呀呀

what you get is living, what you  give is a life.
Thanks!