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写好作文，就是要把握整体框架，框架好，作文也就成功了一半，下面就是教你如何把握那个框架，实践一下，看看是否有用哦！
所谓万能这个概念，如果大家都去这么用的话，就等于没有用了。PartB部分是有的，但是partA没有，PartB可以基本上把这个文章全写完的一个模板方式。万能模板，你这么想，大家告诉我，只要一个题目能够转变成一社会现象之后，最好准备两到三套大的万能无敌模式。
关于万能模式的几个问题：
一、我们选用的句子的灵活性强，经过了精心的选择
二、句型都是五星级,并在开头和长短句子方面有设计,并注意语法的丰富,每句话语法都不同.
三、我们选的句子与市面的任何资料都不同
四、很多同学说写的一样是否是雷同，不大可能，因为很难分到一个考场批判危害性的框架
总共写十七个句子.
第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。
第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, butalso”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性,第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “forexample”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。
第三段六个句子,第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。
第一段
1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，whichseems to be humorous andridiculous but thought-provoking on secondthoughts.(2)The most strikingfeature that impresses me deeply is thatunbelievably, ，(3)Recent fewyears has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous toindividual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题should becondemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt thatitssymbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several seriouseffects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题not only results doesharm to our physical and mental health but alsoresults in a frustratingand humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothingis more harmful than主题 tocontradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, noissue is as harmful as 主题to increase family burdens, which is athreatening situation we areunwilling to see. (5)No better illustrationof this idea can be thoughtthan the example mentioned below .(6)According to a survey made byChina Daily, 63.93% of young people whohave ever experienced主题willlive a dull life or even feel loss of hopeabout the future. (7)If wecannot take useful means, we may not controlthis trend, and someundesirable results may come out unexpectedly, wewill see the gloomyfuture of something.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary thatsome effective measures are taken to prevent主题.(2)On the one hand, weshould be sensible to strengthen the enforcementof the laws to protectsomething. (3)On the other hand, it is demandingfor us to keep peopleaware of the importance of saving somebody out ofthe evil hands ofdestruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done.(5)Although thefight against it is long-standing and tremendousone,our efforts willeventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention toit can you see acolorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
积极有利型的文章
第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.
第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替forexample的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者
第三个段子首句谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.
文章以团队精神为例子
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most strikingfeature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaningsubtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the factthat(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous(重要的)and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.(2)Undoubtedly,it is team work that keeps us continually doingsomething valuable andadmirable in spite of difficulty, that makes usstill full of energy toface the coming challenges and competition andthat offers us thefoundation for the coming success. (3)If we don notcooperatesincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feelfrustratedand humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)Asfar as I amconcerned, there are several advantages that can be given asbelow. Tobegin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work toovercome ourdefects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issueis as good asteam work to make our life more colorful andenergetic.(6)No betterillustration of this idea can be thought than theexample mentionedbelow. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs alongthe productionlines will make a mess just because no one can beproficient in all thethings. (8)Only by cooperating with other peoplecan you put yourcapacities into full play and can you be the winner inthe society.
(1)Fromwhat have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that indoingthings whether great or small there are more or less difficulties,itis much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)Itistherefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken tomakeyour team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we shouldbesensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits.(4)Onthe other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful andhonestto other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done.Practice isthe most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention toit can youmake it better sooner or later．
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