Born and raised in central Ohio,I am a country girl through and through.I am currently studying to become a physical therapist a career path that marks a greater achievement for me.(1)_______________________.I made it pass the first cut the first year I applied,but was turned down for admission.I was crushed because for years I have been determined to become a physical therapist.I received the advice from friends and relatives about changing my major and finding another course for my life.I just couldn’t do it.I knew I could not be as happy in another profession.So I stilled myself, began to work seriously for another year and reapplied.Happily I received notice of my admission.Later I found out that less than 15% of the applicants had been offered positions that year.(2)_______________________.My father told me that if I wantedit badly enough,I would get in. Well, daddy, I wanted it, so there.After graduation, I would like to travel to another country,possibly a Latin-American country and work in a children’s hospital for a year or two.So many of children there are physically handicapped,but most hospitals don’t have the funding to hire a trained staff to care for them properly.I would like to change that somehow.
1)At Ohio state university ,admission into the physical therapy program is intense competitive
2)Now in the first two years professional training ,I couldn't be happy with my decision not to develop on my dream
1)At Ohio state university ,admission into the physical therapy program is intense competitive
2)Now in the first two years professional training ,I couldn't be happy with my decision not to develop on my dream
第一句我还是没有听明白。
1、At Ohio state university， ……physical therapist ……is……
2、Now，in the first two year professional training，i could be happy with decision not to give up my dream。
1)At Ohio state university, admission into the physical therapy program is intensly competitive;
2) Now, in the first two years of professional training, i couldn't be happy with my decision not to give up my dream
At ohio state university,admission into the physical therapy program is intensely competitive.
Now,in the first two years profession training,i could be happyier with my decision not give up my dream.
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