翻译提高（12-02-20） 翻译, efforts

雨落风残

同时，各地区、各部门也做了大量工作，进行了一系列有益探索和尝试，取得了明显实效。但农民工仍面临一些亟待解决的问题，主要表现在工资偏低，被拖欠现象严重；劳动时间长，安全条件差；缺乏社会保障，职业病和工伤事故较多；培训就业、子女上学、生活居住方面也存在着很多困难。维护好农民工的权益是今后一个时期需要解决的突出问题。

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kobe

At the same time ,every district and department have made a lot of afford for a series of some helpfully searches and tries,and then they get a obvious actual effect.
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雨落风残

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曲木么阿佳

At the same time, all regions and sectors have done a large of work and carried out a series of useful exploring and attempt which have made an obvious result. But migrant workers have some problems to be solved which involve a lower wage without being paid on time; a long work time with the bad safety condition; lack of societal guarantee with more professional sick and work-relates injures. There are still other difficulties such as training, education of their children, living condition. Protecting the right of migrant workers is a prominent issue to be solved in the next period.

个人建议：尽量用专业简略的名词表达，比如拖欠工资用“payout default:"，这样比较简略而且专业，翻译考试时会给你加分。另外注意被动语态的使用，显得比较正规。而且有时候也没必要说出主语。

xinxinyifanyi

At the same time, each region and each sector also did abundant of work and conducted a series of beneficial explore and attempts and obtained obvious effect. but the farmer workers still face some impending problems that need to solve urgently, which mainly lies in the lower wage and serious delay problem in getting the wages; long working time and bad safety conditions; the lack of social security with more career disease and accidents; a lot of difficulties in training to work, getting school of the children and in living conditions. The good maintenance of the rights of the farmer workers will be an obvious problem that needs to solve in the future period.

xinxinyifanyi

我不会用被动