标题: Self-Introduction [打印本页]

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作者: yl542099575    时间: 2010-11-9 16:28     标题: Self-Introduction

本帖最后由 areyouready 于 2010-11-10 00:09 编辑

My name is YiLong.I am (graduation) in HuBei university of technology,and now work in XiaoGan.HuBei province.I am born in ShaoGuan.GuangDong province,a very beautiful town.If you travel in my hometown,please keep in touch with me.I will be very please to (introduction) my hometown to you!

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作者: yl542099575    时间: 2010-11-9 16:30

It think very good!!!

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作者: areyouready    时间: 2010-11-10 00:16

回复 1# yl542099575


    thanks for your kindness!if by any chance,i will travel to your hometown!by the way i have marked two of your mistakes in red,hope you notice them .finally ,wish you enjoy yourself here!

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作者: bella1269862749    时间: 2010-11-11 23:17

a nice gay ,if i have a chance to go there ,i will call you

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作者: xiaomeixin    时间: 2010-11-11 23:55

I also in the guangdong province.

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