标题: To be a new bird [打印本页] 作者: 507013899 时间: 2011-3-25 19:31 标题: To be a new bird
本帖最后由 areyouready 于 2011-3-26 17:56 编辑
My english isn't very good, but it can't stop my interests to learn more about foreign culture and people. In my view, I think we study the foreign language that not only to understand the shallow meaning of each words,but also to use it to communicate with foreigners and to learn more about eachother' thought.Today,I think we should change our old minds,to learn a new language is a chanllenge,that in our heart we have study english for several yeas is not for job, but in future we should work with the tool-Enlish. In our deep heart,we love the language,with it we can exchange our mind with each other and know more about our difference,so we can make the world better,In ancient times,because of lacking of acquaintance and forgiving,there were many wars.This is a new man mind,hope that you like it.Thank for you reading. 作者: areyouready 时间: 2011-3-25 19:58
There are some spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes in your words above which you should check out and revise. Anyway I think you have had a not bad show-off,I believe you can do a better job next time.Finally wish you all the best of luck!作者: 陈秀玲 时间: 2011-3-25 22:02
hahaha````welcome to join us ! you will make great progress through your effort here !作者: zhuzi_xa 时间: 2011-4-3 06:25
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