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标题: Time brings a great change to the worlds [打印本页]

作者: Temple    时间: 2011-6-16 16:03     标题: Time brings a great change to the worlds

The past month was really unpeaceful, many times I want to shout, I want to beg the almighty not to play tricks with me, for I am not so strong to deal with those problems well or even I am not able to accept the cruel reality.
    Last summer I broke up with a friend, I rememberde going to the stadium and having a piquant cry, then I decided to live a life without him——yet I haven't achieve that goal till now——and do better in where he knew I am weak. Time went by, I have done nothing worth being appreciated, except that I become more and more easygoing at the time being fatter and fatter. Sometime I dreamed of him, standing far away from me and being very cold, then I woke up with a start, could hardly recover from a recent shock.
    I have never thought of coming across with him,  just because of that, that class should turn so scary when he went to the same classroom, suprised by my big body. I told my self it was OK, there would't be anything more scary. That night, we recovered our "daily chatting", we talked about our thoughts, everything semmed peaceful and fine.
    While the nightmare came ture only 4 days later, he call me angrily and demanded me to take a self-examination carefully, I was puzzled by the reason why he did so and asked him curiously, he hesitated and finally told the truth, OMG, what made him mad and performed such excessive behaviour is just I am much fatter than before. I was in tears the moment I heard his explanation, should he be such a superficial!
    Beauty is but skin-deep, we all know that truism and emphasize that we do believe it unswervingly, including him. Yet what will he do when the former beauty turns a common girl!
    I finally get the knowledge of my being a fool living in an imaginary heaven, being so stupid!
作者: lghmhw    时间: 2011-6-16 17:55

written by you?
作者: Temple    时间: 2011-6-16 18:27

本帖最后由 Temple 于 2011-6-16 18:28 编辑

回复 2# lghmhw


    Yes, also happened on me. But this story contains too many grammar mistakes as well as spelling mistakes, please pick it out when you find, my English is too poor, that is a good chance for me to make progress. Thank you~
作者: 李武军    时间: 2011-6-16 18:47

English is just a way to communicate with each other. Though there are some mistakes, I can still get your meaning. As life goes on, we should look forward. Don't look back.  You know even some foreigners make mistakes with their mother tongue.   Just speak, read and write more, and then you will make a big progress.
作者: Temple    时间: 2011-6-16 19:01

本帖最后由 Temple 于 2011-6-16 20:34 编辑

回复 4# 李武军


    Thank you for your encouragement, I won't care about making mistakes~ I just want to get more knowledge by correcting my mistakes~
    As for life, it always shows great charm to me, I will never look back, I have my splendidness every now and then.
作者: lghmhw    时间: 2011-6-16 19:49

回复 3# Temple


    wow,your english is well
作者: 李武军    时间: 2011-6-16 19:54

回复 5# Temple


   you've done a good job.~~~~
作者: xiaomeixin    时间: 2011-6-16 21:48

Stop looking back or wondering.No one can call back yesterday.We should look forward because time can never stop for you.Time can prove everything.I think that he will sure to  regret what he had said to you someday.
You are a clever girl and eager to learn.I believe you can make great progress with us here.We all would help you.
Confidence is very important.
作者: Temple    时间: 2011-6-16 22:05

回复 8# xiaomeixin


    Thank you~ I will be sincere to my heart and those friends who care about me~ I don't know what tomorrow is to prepare for me, so I have no reason to refuse it or slight it over. I will deal with it wholeheartedly~
作者: xiaomeixin    时间: 2011-6-17 09:06

回复 9# Temple


    Very good.I think you will be happy.
作者: dragon520    时间: 2011-6-17 09:26

Nothing special!
Tomorrow will be a good day!
Do yourself,come on!
作者: 莎莎dawn    时间: 2011-6-17 10:00

I 've gotta say that guy was so awful,didn't he understand a girl owning a little baby fat was more lovely.I am so proud that you've jumped out from your past,and I am sure you must be in a better life without him.Well,actuallly,you wasn't stupid at all,you just loved too deep~!~!By the way,your Enlish is so cool,you know what ,when I read your article I've gotta look up many words in the dictionary~!~!
作者: SugerDaisy    时间: 2011-6-20 15:02

I think this guy is not that guy worth your love, so just look beyond what you see, you will have a right person waiting for you in the future, all you need to do is to be confident and smile, life will be better, trust me, come on!
作者: Temple    时间: 2011-6-20 17:19

回复 13# SugerDaisy


    I would~ Thank you!




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