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There are some mistakes. 
1.my english was very poor (no in) last year  ! 
2. I (have) tried many time(s) to improve my poor english . 
3.when I was three grade(in Grade 3) in senior school,Oneday I asked myself what I was going to do ? (.) 
4.I decided to tryed the last once(confused!) ,if I failed,I wii never to(no to) learn it forever  
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you should learn much harder,especially your grammer! 
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