Need suggestions Help

fielding

The objective of my resume:


A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier. And then,he tried to be an accountant. At 2004, He got his first job in Changfa Refrigeration Company as a storage accountant. With his strong learning ability and so much efforts, he promoted step-by-step ,and finally became an account officer after four years when he left. And now, another four years later, he was in charge of whole financial business of a domestic investment company. At the same time, he encountered the bottleneck of occupation. And he would like to attempt to new opportunities and challenges in foreign companies. He prefers doing a challenging work rather than boring one!

I need suggestions to improve it and find mistakes. Thanks

簿子酒

i think you want to be employee of the foreign companies,so you can have a try,but first of  all,very superior english-spoken and to be with filled with condients must be necessary,even the very high professional skill in account is a deal.you know job-hopping will cost you ,stand calm and think what you want.

Jessicalv

First ,you need to let us know what kind of advice do you need

mei_charles

yes, agree with kobe, advise for what? your resume or career?

or you want to know how to survive in foreign company?
pls be precise, thx!

fielding

advices

Rachel0818

不是很明白意图是什么

kobe

suggestion about what?
about recorrecting  this article? or you want to hear adivices about your challenge?