Children's day~!! about, sweet, three

莎莎dawn

As we all know,today is Children's day when they needn't be worried about their homework,and just have a nice time with their parents.At noon ,I went out for working again,so I desided to find a restaurant to have lunch,I heard the boss said "we 've closed because today is Children's day ,when I got in.what a sweet famiy was!this moving occasion reminded me of my Childrens's day:my parants 've also stoped their works to keep company with we three sisters,at that day,we've worn ours new dress to go to pleasure ground and barbecue.I and my sisters have always expected if only everyday had been children's day.Now,Children's day has become my beautiful memories,I didn't wanna grow up~~!~!Do you think so?

seaso

happy children‘s day....

陈秀玲

in fact , we grow up all the time , we can not go back to our childhood.
there is something wrong with your sentences , check and coorect(correct) them , you'll  make great progress . come on !莎莎dawn

fangting

yes ,there is some wrong words!

xiaomeixin

Yesterday,I cooked supper on my own,and no one could share with me.I was very lonely yesterday.

莎莎dawn

回复 3# 陈秀玲


    I can't find it ~!help me~!~!

莎莎dawn

回复 5# xiaomeixin


    well,where is your friend?

陈秀玲

回复 6# 莎莎dawn


    As we all know,today is Children's day when they needn't be worried about their homework,and just have a nice time with their parents.At noon ,I went out for working again,so I decided to find a restaurant to have lunch,I heard the boss saying "we 've closed because today is Children's day ,when I got in.what a sweet famiy was!this moving occasion reminded me of my Childrens's day:my parants 've also stoped their works to keep company with we three sisters,at that day,we've worn our new dress to go to pleasure ground and barbecue.my sisters and I have always expected if only everyday had been children's day.Now,Children's day has become my beautiful memories,I don't wanna grow up~~!~!Do you think so?

hear sb doing sth .

陈秀玲

回复 5# xiaomeixin


    yeah , you are right . I have typed the wrong word of "correct". haha```

xiaomeixin

回复 7# 莎莎dawn


    Many of my friends have boyfriends or girlfriends,I don't want to bother them.And some of my best friends are far away form my home.

莎莎dawn

回复 10# xiaomeixin


    You should find a boyfriend to celebrate Children's day~!~!

xiaomeixin

回复 11# 莎莎dawn


    Your idea sounds good.But I don't want to.I don't want to fall in love in these two years.I want to be single and enjoy my study.I want to study hard to achieve my dream.

莎莎dawn

回复 12# xiaomeixin


   I think that Boyfriend and your dream can exit together.

xiaomeixin

回复 13# 莎莎dawn


    I don't have so much time.

练习者

On the Children's Day ,my husband and I went out to have a delicious dinner to celebrate this day for our children  who will be born in Oct.

莎莎dawn

回复 14# xiaomeixin


    Ok, you dream must be being come(coming) ture~!~!

xiaomeixin

回复 16# 莎莎dawn


    Thank you very much.I won't let you down.

莎莎dawn

回复 15# 练习者


    congratulations~!~!how sweet a familiy is ~!~!

莎莎dawn

回复 17# xiaomeixin


    you won't ~!~!you are so excellent~!~!

abc_3345

i like children,s day