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发表于 2010-7-7 23:24
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study----studying
speak----speaking
If you are free----If you have spare time (not necessary)
you speak English more than the past----with out 'the'
(The grammar of this sentence is correct, but the meaning may be a little bit misunderstanding)
I will write: you should speak English as more as possible than before.
What is the meaning of "Wnglish", or maybe it is "English"?
comfident----confident
Here is some grammatical mistakes.
You need be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes.
Next spelling mistake is "ast", maybe you want to say "past".
The last sentence, I guess that you want to say.
I hope that you will improve your English with my advice.
above, just some suggestion of mine... |
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