【参赛征文】My experience experience

ROMM

第二组： train . night .friend .trip .food.
My experience
  Do you have some experience in your life which look like so fantastic? maybe most of people chose the insipid life to pursue the happiness of life.
  I will pretend my own experience to you,maybe you think this just a well-behaved child have done some absurd thing.
  Obviously, this just a convention beginning.I usually feel fragile but don't lack the vigour of youth. though I go along with the road as my parent expect, I don't understand what I real want.so I always dream to change the situation.
  One day ,I planed to have a trip which like the protagonist of <<into the wild>>have, I will travel the mystery of the world by train and make friend with unknown.it seems like fantastic and I plunged into my plan with immense zeal.what most important is it againist to my parent's idea.I felt excite when the train set out and I knew it a new start .the first day gone smoothly as I expected. However,the loneliness and hugry came down when the last light beam vanished and the night befell.so I remembered that my mother would cook many delicious food and we would surround the table ,It was so nice that I couldn't help falling into deep thought,I found the reason why I felt so fragile that I never faced up with my weaks.for fear of making my parent disappointed and being abandoned by my familiar and being betraied by my friends and so on.
  what I did last is to make an apology to my parent and who cares about me,oh ! it's over ,don't say it so dull.because it's just one part of our life.

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it is a little bit hard to read it ;maybe because there are some philosophies of living in your artcle.