who can point out the mistake to us? english

seaso

for instance， i make a sentence which put a foot wrong ，such as grammar，sentence pattern，
the tense and so on。if we couldnot  correct it， there are no progress· to us，just like me who have a
terrible english，i am anxious for improving myself. Do you agree with me or who can help me?

seaso

ok，thank you again

陈秀玲

回复 3# seaso


    it doesn't matter . but you have to pay attention to these and check it when you have finished writing a sentence.

seaso

回复 2# 陈秀玲


    thanks a lot.  you are right.it's my fault.
i often do that.

陈秀玲

i make a sentence which put a foot wrong .这句话有问题，我不是很理解你要表达的意思是什么，你是要表达“我造句的时候会出现错误”还是“我所造的句子有点错误”，不是很清楚，而且，which所引导的定语成句，如果是在你这个句子上的话，那么a sentence 在这里相当于第三人称单数形式所以which后面的谓语put要加s，再说which用在这里不是很合适，因为我觉得你是想表达，“我所造出来的句子有点错误”，I made a mistake in this sentence written by myself. 我觉得这样翻译比较好，你觉得呢？

come on !