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回复 1# eileengao


    hello,this article is very excellent and I like it so much, but there are several points that I want to consult with you.Let's study together.
    7. Thousand of time 修改为 Thousands of times
    8. Only when I miss you deeply I feel so lonely 修改为 The reason why the loneliness is so leaden is only that I miss you deeply.
    9.that my love just like a kite has broken its line and won’t...修改为 that my love is just like a kite which has broken ... and won't...
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