昨天帮人翻译了个留学文件，请大家帮忙修正 翻译求助

小钰钰

朋友家的小孩想留学，让我帮忙翻译，自我感觉翻译的很糟糕，请大家帮忙，好多词汇感觉翻译的不准确。
Admissions
Applying to the University is the first step
In order for you to participate in our programs you must apply to the University and be
accepted. So your first step is to go to the Student Services web-site section on prospective
students and find out about admission to SFU. When you've finished looking over the
admission requirements then you can hit the "Think You're Ready" button to apply to the
University.
Remember the deadlines are about 4 months prior to the start of the semester you would
like to apply for. You must apply by April 30th for September admission and by September
30th for January admission. Most of our programs start in September.
College Transfer
The best way to find out what your BC College courses transfer in as is to go to the B.C.
Transfer Guide. Please note that most FPA credit does not transfer directly to a course, but
something that looks like "FPA 1THRSTU (3)" which means in this case that it is 3 credits of
lower division theater studio courses.
If you are applying from a college, or plan to go to a college first, it is a good idea to make
sure you have taken care of at least some of your Writing, Quantitative and Breadth
Requirements before coming to SFU.
Audition/Interview/Portfolio
Most of our majors have an audition/interview process before entry. Some happen in the
spring before first year starts, but most happen 2nd or 3rd year. Below is some information,
but it is really important that you click on the button above for your area of interest so we
can send you information to guide you to the next step of application.
Art & Culture: Start with FPA 111 and when you finish FPA 210 with a B or better we can
declare your major.
Dance: Auditions for Fall semester entry to first year are in April and a second set in
August. Always best to attend the first audition. If you are out of town there is the option to
audition by video.
Film: Film has a questionnaire and interview process for entry into first year due on March
9th for Fall 2012.

Music: FPA 104 is open to all and is the logical starting point. If you feel you can read and
write musical notation, contact our office for a waiver from this class.
Theatre Performance: Auditions are held in April and August to join the 2nd year
ensemble in the Fall semester. FPA 150 is the course you would sign up for in first year.
Theatre Production and Design: FPA 170 and 171 are the starting point for Production
and Design and students will enter the major or extended minor after second year.
Visual Art: There is no portfolio for first year Visual Art. FPA 160 is the starting point. The
major is declared after FPA 261 is complete for entry into third year. There is an interview
for the Extended Minor for entry into second year.
For more information please contact our office at 778 -782-3363 or e-mail us.



以下是我翻译的

入学

申请学校是第一步

为了参加我们的课程您必须申请我们的学校并被录取。第一步是去学生服务网站招生部分，找出SFU的准入。当你阅读完我们的准入标准并认为您达到我们要求请点击“我准备好”按钮申请学校。

请记得报名截止日期是你想要申请课程学期开始前4个月。你必须在的四月三十日之前为九月的开学，九月三十为一月的开学做好申请。大部分的课程在九月份开始。

转学

找出您BC大学课程转学要求的最好办法是找到网站的转学指南 。请注意大部分的FPA 学分不能直接转换。但是有些类似"FPA 1THRSTU (3)"这的意思是戏曲电影专业低于其他专业三个学分。

如果你正在申请大学或者打算去大学，请确保在您来SFU之前保存好您的一些作品，一定数量和广度的资质证明。

面试

大部分的专业有一个面试，有一些是在第一学年开始前的春天。但是大部分在第二年或者第三年。下面是一些信息，但是点击上面的按钮“你的关注”是非常重要的，这样我们就可以给您发送信息指导您下一步的申请。

艺术文化 开始于FPA111当你完成FPA 210 并完成B或以上我们可以     你的专业

舞蹈 秋季学期的面试在在第一年的四月，第二次是在八月。最好参加第一轮面试。如果您不在城镇可以选择录音面试。

电影 影视专业有一个调查表以及一个入学面试流程，报名截止日期为2012年三月九日。

音乐 FDA104对所有开放，这就是理论的起始分。如果您感觉您可以阅读并且写音符，联系我们办公室取消这一课程。

戏剧表演 面试在四月和八月在秋季学期入学后第二学年的联合汇演。FPA150是这门学科您在第一年必须完成的。

戏剧导演和编剧 FPA170HE 171是这们学科的起始分或者是第二学年后的选修。

视觉艺术  视觉艺术第一年没有面试。FPA160是此专业起始分。第三学期开始前FPA需要达到261.第二学年开始前有一个选修面试。

更多信息请联系    或者发邮件给我们。

小钰钰

谁帮我看看呀。

小钰钰

非常感激，以后要多跟版主学习。

Think You're Ready 这个地方我没理解好，确实多了。

小钰钰

taken care of 这个地方为什么是了解呢？不是保存的意思。因为我知道国外好多大学是要这些东西的。

小钰钰

面试那块我是晕的，我不清楚三个的区别，我开始翻译了时间，但是看到后来的说是第二年第三年。这样跟之前的开学前不是矛盾的么

小钰钰

FPA 111 这个是什么东东呢？其实所有的FPA加个数字我都不是太理解。是不是指的某门课程，但是他们用了编号？

小钰钰

Theatre Performance: Auditions are held in April and August to join the 2nd year
ensemble in the Fall semester.
戏剧表演：在四月和八月要进行试镜，做为第二学年秋季学期联合演出的准备。

这一句 为什么什么做准备是在哪里体现的呢？

小钰钰

Audition/Interview/Portfolio
这三个词怎么翻呢？

小钰钰

Some happen in the
spring before first year starts, but most happen 2nd or 3rd year.
    这句话你 ...
雨落风残 发表于 2012-3-8 16:22

    这个句子加上时间，不就成了这样“大部分的专业在开学之前有一个面试，有一些是在第一学年开始前的春天。但是大部分在第二年或者第三年。"不前后矛盾啊，入学前，为什么又是第二年第三年，那不是入学后了啊。

小钰钰

这下都明白了。感谢感谢。

小钰钰

English language requirementAll applicants, regardless of country of origin or citizenship status, must demonstrate competence inthe English language in one of the following six ways, depending on where you are completing youreducation. (Note that enrollment in first-year writing intensive courses requires higher grades thanadmission grades. See our FAQs.)1.  completion of the last three years of full-time secondary education in English in Canada or another country where the principal language of instruction is English. A minimum blended  grade of 60% or C in one of English 12, English Literature 12, or English 12 First Peoples, or their equivalents, is required.
　　Note: a final, blended mark of 75% will permit enrollment in a writing-intensive (W) course.
　　2.  completion of the last four years of full-time secondary education in English at a recognizedInternational school where the principal language of instruction in the country is not English. Aminimum grade of C or 60% in senior level English is required.
　　3.  completion of IB English A 1 or A2 (HL or SL) with a minimum grade of 3.
　　4.  completion of a three unit transferable English course or certified W (writing intensive) coursewith a minimum grade of C-.
　　5.  completion of the IELTS (International English Language Testing System) with a minimumoverall band score of 6.0.
　　(Effective for Summer 2012 admission and later: completion of the IELTS (InternationalEnglish Language Testing System) with a minimum overall band score of 6.5 with no part lessthan 6.0.)6.  completion of TOEFL IBT (Test of English as a Foreign Language internet-based test) with anoverall score of 88 or better with a minimum score of 20 in each of the four components(listening, speaking, writing, reading).
　　For more information on the literacy requirements visit New Admission Standards.

英语语言要求

任何申请人，无论国籍身份，必须必须通过以下下六种方式表现出自己的英语语言能力，这依赖于你在什么地方完成你的教育。（请注意参加第一年的写作课程需要入门以上级别）



1.       在加拿大或者其它主要用英语授课的国家完成至少三年以上的全日制中等教育。A minimum blended  grade of 60% or C in one of English 12, English Literature 12, or English 12 First Peoples, or their equivalents, is required.

注：最后

2 在主要的教学语言不是英语的国家里的被认可的国际学校，完成至少四年的全日制中等教育。至少达到C等或高级英语中 60%。

3 完成 IB 英语 A1 或 A2 (HL 或 SL)至少为三级。

4 完成三个单元的英语翻译课程或者写作课程至少达到C级。

5.完成雅思 （国际英语语言测试系统） 总分最低达到 6.0分 。(适用于2012 夏季入学以及之后： 雅思 （国际英语语言测试系统） 最低总分 6.5分 并且任何部分都不能低于6.0分。）

6.完成托福 IBT （英语作为外语以互联网为依托的测试），最低总分 88，四个部分 （听、 说、 写、 读），每项最低20分。

更多关于语言要求的信息请访问

小钰钰

好的

小钰钰

这依赖于你在什么地方完成你的教育。这个地方我感觉也翻译的很奇怪

还有第一段 不太明白啥意思啊

1.
A minimum blended
grade of 60% or C in one of English 12, English Literature 12, or English 12 First Peoples, or their equivalents, is required.

小钰钰

Special Fees
Application and Admission
Residence
Replacement of Documentation
Replacement of Library/Identification Card
Graduation
Official Transcript

关于收费的 Replacement of Documentation
Replacement of Library/Identification Card  Official Transcript

这三个怎么措辞呢。