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本帖最后由 fielding 于 2012-5-16 14:30 编辑

The objective of my resume:


A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier. And then,he tried to be an accountant. At 2004, He got his first job in Changfa Refrigeration Company as a storage accountant. With his strong learning ability and so much efforts, he promoted step-by-step ,and finally became an account officer after four years when he left. And now, another four years later, he was in charge of whole financial business of a domestic investment company. At the same time, he encountered the bottleneck of occupation. And he would like to attempt to new opportunities and challenges in foreign companies. He prefers doing a challenging work rather than boring one!

I need suggestions to improve it and find mistakes. Thanks

i think you want to be employee of the foreign companies,so you can have a try,but first of  all,very superior english-spoken and to be with filled with condients must be necessary,even the very high professional skill in account is a deal.you know job-hopping will cost you ,stand calm and think what you want.

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First ,you need to let us know what kind of advice do you need

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yes, agree with kobe, advise for what? your resume or career?

or you want to know how to survive in foreign company?
pls be precise, thx!

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advices

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不是很明白意图是什么

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suggestion about what?
about recorrecting  this article? or you want to hear adivices about your challenge?

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