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Need for your help

Hi!
Everyone!
I am pleased to jion The Ting Room.
My English is very poor ,now i worked in the clinic,people over there all speark English or japanese.
I hope ,I can talk with them in English .
I like the Room .you can learn much from here!
I believed I can do it !
All this is myslef-introduction.Maybe something wrong in a sentence.Please index them!
Thanks fou your kind !

回复 8# sml402102


   It is my pleasure, friend!I believe you can be success ! Your dream will be come true!COME ON!

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回复 6# 心魔作祟


    Thank you very much ! Igot it !
   Thanks again !
   

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Don‘t cry because it is over, smile because it happened.
不要因为结束而哭泣,微笑吧,为你的曾经拥有。

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①My English is very poor ,now i worked in the clinic,people over there all speark English or japanese.这句话中的 work 应该用现在时。②I hope ,I can talk with them in English .中的介词in 用法不准确。talk with sb 是和某人交谈,介词应为with.③you can learn much from here!这句话你想表达的意思是什么,主语好像应该是I 吧?呵呵!④I believed I can do it !中的”相信,认为“用现在时就行啊believe. ⑤All this is myslef-introduction.中all 和 this 中间应加个介词of 否则就会主谓不一致。⑥Maybe something wrong in a sentence.中的冠词应该用some或者Maybe something wrong in the article.也是可以的。⑦Thanks for your kind !中介词for后不能加形容词kind,应该把形容词改为副词即kindly.
你的自我介绍很好,说实话比我写的好多了,只是我发现你的介词用法掌握的不是很好。希望你以后会慢慢的学会这些。我不是老师所以解释的不是很详细,希望你能看懂。
这个英文论坛欢迎你!加油!

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freemasonry

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your English is good!

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回复 2# kobe


    I'm so happy with what you said !

    I must "good good study,day day up!"

   

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Hey,guy, Are you abroad?
your English is not bad,
I am happy you like here,I hope your English skill will be improved soon through your effort

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