听力首页 听力教程 VOA慢速 英语歌曲 外语下载 英语小说 英语词典 在线背单词 听力论坛 韩语学习
听力专题 英语教材 VOA标准 英语动画 英语考试 资源技巧 英语翻译 单词连连看 听力家园 德语学习
听力搜索 英语导读 BBC英语 英语视频 英语电台 英语QQ群 外语歌曲   英语游戏 英语网刊 日语学习
当前位置: 英语听力论坛 » 网友求助 » 小学三年级的作文,请帮忙批改。
返回列表 发帖

小学三年级的作文,请帮忙批改。

ME
My name is ye qi, I’m nine. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.
  I have a big bedroom. bedroom have a telephone It grey, two desk It a brown a yellow, and two chair It black.
  I have big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has old face. He love apple. My grandmother is kindly old lady. She has big body. She love grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has thin body. She likes peach.
  My teacher is tall and thin. She has thin body. She To teach we English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.
  The pet is a handsome cat is me. It has big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.
  I love family.

My name is ye qi, I’m nine. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.
  I have a big bedroom. bedroom have a telephone It grey, two desk It a brown a yellow, and two chair It black.  I have big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has old face. He love apple. My grandmother is kindly old lady. She has big body. She love grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has thin body. She likes peach.
  My teacher is tall and thin. She has thin body. She To teach we English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat is me. It has big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.
  I love family.

红色部分句子需要调整一下,其他还不错。

TOP

很不错,三年级的学生能写出这样的英文。继续加油

TOP

My name is ye qi, I’m nine. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.
   I have a big bedroom. bedroom has a telephone , two desks, one is brown and another is yellow, and two black chairs .
   I have a big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has an old face. He loves apple. My grandmother is a kindly old lady. She has big body. She loves grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has thin body. She likes peach.
   My teacher is tall and thin. She has thin body. She teaches us English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.
   I have a pet. It is a handsome cat. It has a big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.
   I love my family.

TOP

creative
multi

TOP

initiative

TOP

小学生认识这么多单词哦

TOP

量词好像经常都少了  例如:I have big family.(少了a)

TOP

返回列表