China drew the most ever attention of the world in the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, in which the Chinese athletes set a new record by winning more gold medals than before. The winners of gold medals each received more rewards from local governments as well as a bonus of 200,000
yuan from the central government. Opinions are divided on the phenomenon.
Some are in favor of it. In their opinion, athletes have won great honour for the country and to win a gold medal, athletes have to make great efforts. What’s more, rewards will benefit the training of future players.
In contrast, others hold the opinion that athletes are trained by the country so they are supposed to win honor for China. Also some athletes will probably quit after getting much money. What’s worse, some enterprises will take advantage of the successful athletes to advertise for them, which will have a bad effect on their image.
As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to do so since it can inspire athletes to do better in the next Olympics.
3．参考词汇：陪读 accompany sb. studying at school 督促 urge
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be accompanied by parents studying at school. Opinions are divided on the topic.
70% of my classmates hold the view that there is no need for parents to do so. For one thing, we may fall into the habit of dependence, which will have a negative effect on the development of our self-control ability. For another, it will affect our parents’ work, study and rest.
However, 30% of us are in favor of it. In their opinion, with parents accompanying us, we can spare more time to concentrate on our study and we will become more healthy. Furthermore, parents can help set our study goal and urge us to complete our study tasks. Also we can overcome difficulties on our own. with their encouragement and develop a good habit of studying.
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore , it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. ____________________________________________________________________________
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy
eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often
go to school without breakfast and some like to have snacks during breaks, as a result of which they can’t take in enough nutrients. We can also find that some students are particular about food; and
still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was
very good, but I’d like to tell you several problems I found while watching the film.
Firstly, because there were too many advertisements, the film failed to begin on time, which made some audience angry. Secondly, the volume was too high, only to make me feel uncomfortable. And the last, when the film was on, I looked around carefully but didn’t see an exit sign. I think we shouldn’t ignore potential safety hazard in public places, especially in a cinema.
Of course, it’s my own opinion, but I do hope that my suggestion will be a little help to you and that your cinema will take on a new look.
When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad. The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already more than double that of the year 1996. It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast. And yet, reports about people’s bad manners flood in. Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere. The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.
China has long been regarded as a country with good manners. Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win respect for yourself and our country!
1. As is shown by the graph/in the table。。（概述图表，得出结论）
It can be seen from the table that … （概述图表，得出结论）
A. 正如曲线所示，最近54年来该国人口飞速增长。
As is shown by the graph, there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the
past five years.
B. 从表中所给的统计数字可以看出，从1985年到1990年中国的人均收入迅速提高。
From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew 、rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990.
C. 从曲线图可以得出结论，最近5年来中国人口的出生率已经大大下降。
It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years.
2. … amount to … （数量总计）
add up to/come to /sum up to
全部费用合计200美元。
All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200.
3. … increase/rise/grow/climb from … to … （数量增减）
…decrease/fall/drop from…to…
A. 这个工厂生产的彩电已由1986年的5000台增加到1990年的21000台。
The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.
B. 这个学校的教职工人数已减少到700人。
The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons.
There is (was) a rapid/sharp/sudden /gradual/slow rise/decrease in …
…be on the increase/decline
最近几年来这个地区的棉花产量有了迅速增长。
There has been a rapid increase in the cotton output in this area in the past few years.
4.（be）three times as + 形容词 + as …
(be) three times the size/amount/number/height/length of…
A. 现在我们地区的粮食产量相当于1970年的3倍。
The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970.
B. 我校学生人数是去年的两倍。
The number of the students in our school is twice that of last year.
5. Compared with … , …
与去年相比，今年13项主要产品的产量都有大幅度增长。
Compared with that of last year, the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent.
6. “结尾”段落中常用的句型：
1. In my opinion, … 2. Personally, I … 3. In short (= In brief), …
4. In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6. To conclude , it seems clear that …
As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the former view. Therefore, my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. Another 1 percent are foreigner students.
As is shown in chart 2, sixty percent of them intend to go to university, which is double the number of those who will attend vocational schools. Besides, the other ten percent choose to go abroad for further study.
In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. Also with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. In addition, we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!
That's all. Thank you.
07扬州一模试卷书面表达范文：
Different Sources of Income Between Chinese and American Students
These two charts show the differences in the sources of income between Chinese and American students. As is shown in the charts, Chinese students get 90 percent of their income from their parents while American students get only 50 percent from parents. Besides, for Chinese students, income from doing part time jobs makes up only 5 percent of the total. So does income from scholarships. However, money from part time jobs and scholarships for American students amount to 35 and 15 percent respectively.
From the analysis above, we can easily find out the reasons. Chinese parents like to take more care of their children. They’d rather work hard and save money in order to provide their children with everything they need. American parents, on the other hand, like to pay more attention to the development of children’s ability to be independent. They would rather encourage their children to support themselves. As for students, Chinese students tend to depend on parents while American students think it natural to depend on themselves.
单句改错：
1. American students get 50% of their income from parents. While in China, 90% of the students’ income come from parents.
2. It causes the students in China don’t want to do part-time work to earn money.
3. American students are more indepent while Chinese students always depend their parents.
4. Besides the income from parents, who make up 50%, 35% of American students’ income are from their part-time jobs.
5. There is about 35% of the income comes from part-time jobs.
6. As is shown in the charts that half of the income of American students is from parents.
7. Chinese students are easier to depend on their parents.
8. Chinese parents don’t like American parents who attach great importance to their independence.
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph, in 2004 there occurred 570,000 traffic accidents, in which109,000 people got killed. By October 2005, the number of the accidents reached 566,000 and 95,600 people lost their lives. While the number of the cars makes up only 2% of the total of the world, the rate of the deaths is 22%, making China a country with the highest death rate of traffic accidents in the world.
The main reason why so many traffic accidents have happened is that the roads are too crowded and people ignore traffic rules. In order to reduce the traffic accidents, first, the government should take some proper measures, such as developing public traffics. Second, people should obey traffic rules, especially the drivers.
Only when people have decided to take action will traffic problems be solved.
书面表达训练 （议论文 结合图表发表观点）（八）
（南通二模考试范文）
Recently I have conducted a survey on taking a nap after lunch among my classmates. Most of them are in the habit of sleeping for a while at noon for they believe it does good to them. In general, students prefer to do so around 12:30 and the nap usually lasts for about 30 minutes. They often choose to sleep at home instead of in their classroom or dormitory.
Hopefully, the result of my survey can draw the attention of our parents and school. Since most students are in need of a nap, proper arrangements should be made so that students can have a good rest after a whole morning’s hard work. Students should not be asked to do extra schoolwork during this period of time. After all, with a nap after lunch, one can feel refreshed and energetic enough to study more efficiently in the afternoon.
书面表达训练 （应用文）（九）
（扬州一模考试范文）
Dear Wang Hai,
How are you doing?
Recently an American bestseller is popular among the students in our school. I read it, and to my
excitement, it was really inspiring. I would like to recommend it to you.
The book Chicken Soup for the Soul, written by Jack Canfield, was first published in 1993 and soon became a bestseller. So far over 8 million copies have been sold, ranking first in New York Times and USA Today. The book with 101 stories to open your heart and rekindle your spirit will surely inspire readers of all ages. It has been translated into tens of languages, spreading love to every corner of the world. Besides, an English version will be of great help to English learners as it will help improve our English.
The original price of the book is 64 yuan, but you can get one for 54.4 yuan at dangdang.com, which will save you 9.6 yuan. The book will be delivered to you within 24-48 hours after your payment.
To get more information, you can visit the website. Get one and enjoy it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
主要存在问题：
遗漏要点：24-48小时内送达
理解错误：款到付货
注意不同表达方式：
1．适合英语学习者
be good for English learners
be of benefit to English learners
be a great help to English learners
2． 款到付货
It won’t be delivered to you until paid for.
Pay money first and then the book will be delivered to your door.
The book will be delivered to you after your payment.
3． 定价64元 当当价54.5元 节省9.60元
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line, which is 9.6 yuan cheaper than the original price.
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line and can save you as much as 9.60 yuan.
Dangdang.com offers 15% discount, meaning you only have to pay 54.5 yuan.
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me about a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examination in June and there’s a short time ahead. Every day I did some English reading, practised writing compositions, worked out a number of maths problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
