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作者: Dabria 时间: 2012-8-19 22:49 标题: My life

本帖最后由 Dabria 于 2012-8-19 22:53 编辑

[attach]14177[/attach]Hello, everyone, this is my first time play this web, I saw a number of person plaied this website，haaaaa. and hereafter I' ll write some things about me show everyone , I hope everybody can tell me mistake. thank you ,becuase I 'm a beginner. thank you a lot!

作者: Dabria 时间: 2012-8-19 22:50

期待大家的回复多多指点错误吧

作者: AllenHL 时间: 2012-8-20 09:39

作者: 城南小巷 时间: 2012-8-20 10:26

作者: studish 时间: 2012-8-20 10:44

"saw" should change "see"

作者: Andy-Lee 时间: 2012-8-20 13:40

very good and you are beautiful.

作者: 心魔作祟 时间: 2012-8-20 21:12

Beatifull girl you are!

welcome to join us !

作者: kobe 时间: 2012-8-21 08:03

you have a charming smile

作者: 簿子酒 时间: 2012-8-21 11:26

welcome to join us

作者: leo123 时间: 2012-8-22 09:09

作者: cjp00000 时间: 2012-8-22 13:32

本帖最后由 cjp00000 于 2012-8-22 13:38 编辑

First, welcome to join us, then I think you have made a mistake about "play" in preceding part of the text you wrote, I think you should say "played" not "plaied".

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