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作者: 天野宁宁    时间: 2010-8-1 19:32     标题: Self introduction

My name is Nene Amano. I am a middle school students. I like speak English,but I can't speak English very well.So I didn't  upset and don't know what to do. Tomorrow we grade school begins. I hope I can learn this semester better than before. Here is a good place.I like it here. I'm new here.I can speak a little English.So ended.
作者: DNR    时间: 2010-8-1 20:03

Dear Nene,
nice to meet you, my name is D, i am a newbie here too. :p
we have one more thing in common, let's cheer for the love of English
A new semester is a new beginning, you'll be fine as long as you have the heart for it
作者: 天野宁宁    时间: 2010-8-1 20:51

D,nice to meet you too.I agree with your opinion. This semester I must  progress .Let us together.
作者: DNR    时间: 2010-8-1 20:58

i don't feel comfortable with your sentences, i hope you don't mind if i made some suggestions

"This semester i must progress"
i kind of understand your underline point, but it just doesn't sound right to me
how about " I have to (must) make some progress in this semester"

"Let us together," this is only half of the sentence
how about "Let us work hard together" or "Let us do this together"?




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