标题: 【参赛征文】When a fish fall in love with bear [打印本页]
作者: Y-Z 时间: 2010-8-23 14:22 标题: 【参赛征文】When a fish fall in love with bear
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When a fish fall in love with bear
There is a beautiful wooden house which belong to a little bear called TOM on the deep of the rainforest .A river named love river goes through it. Bears always play games and catch fish in love river .
One day ,Tom goes out to search something to eat .There happened to be a injured fish asking for help .Suddenly .Tom caught it as fast as lighting .For that girl the last hope was broken ,her syes were filled with tears as if she will be made a kind of delicious food. However ,as we known of all Tom is famous for his kindness and warm-hearted, he took her back and saved her .
When the girl recovered .Tom sent her back home (the love river) .but it is a pity that ,Tom just knowed the girl"s name is July .After July came back home ,a ridiculous idea was coming out,July tell herself that her have falled in love with Tom ,because her heart was filled with Tom's face ,even everything about Tom .
As time went by ,there are large change happend to Tom. But since for a girl,whatever happend to her lover she can recognize him at first glance.When Tom was catching fish in the love river .Just in order to let Tom know that she miss him ,July made herself be catched by Tom."Tom I can't belived that I can meet you again .Do you know ,after that day I missed you day and night .I know it is not reality even is ridiculous ,but i just want to let you know i love you."July said .When Tom got it ,he didn't know what should he do .As an English saying goes ,"God helps those who help themselves".at last July got Tom's love .Nobady knows why and nobady can accept.
It is a summer holiday morming ,thay pack sth up and begin their trip .Where are they going ,as the matter of fact July has a dream which go to sea with Tom to see sunrise .
During the day ,Tom goes along the river ,talking with July ,in the early evening they always stop to make camp.For them ,every day have different exciting things and everyday is happy.
With the umbrella of Tom ,whatever things happend to July ,Tom also do it with her .Since July's dream will be achieved,unfortunately some terrible things happend to them.The bright sunshines also like usually ,they were talking and laughing with happy.Suddenly ,an eddy caught July toughly ,it is useless that anything Tom try do .At the end ,July died without saying anything .Tom was so heart-struck that lose heart for life .But finally ,he chose to bring July's dream go on the uncompieted trip .
Nobady knows about the story next ,maby Tom got married ,maby... but we know Tom love July like July love him
作者: evaxiaofan 时间: 2010-8-23 22:52
本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-8-23 22:53 编辑
I think love will be always in Tom's mind.
I'm afraid there is something wrong with tense.
作者: 木棉花开了 时间: 2010-8-24 10:40
beautiful story . i love the felling of perpetual love as the bear's and the bravery of the lovely fish.
作者: areyouready 时间: 2010-8-28 12:08
the story is just like the pop song "a wolf has fallen in love with a little lamb".please notice your spelling mistakes in your artcle.
作者: areyouready 时间: 2010-8-28 12:09
the story is just like the pop song "a wolf has fallen in love with a little lamb".please notice your spelling mistakes in your artcle.
作者: Y-Z 时间: 2010-8-30 11:55
回复 6# areyouready
thank you for your advice.
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