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回复 11# leyla


    First,I'd like to point out a couple of mistakes in the paragraph.

now I am feeling disappointed ,because my parents don't approve the relationship between me and my boyfriend ,they think him won't have a bright future and worries about me.I don't know how to say to them ,I think they won't lieten to me

The correct version shold be:

Now I am feeling disappointed,because my parents don't approve the relationship between my boyfriend and me.（英语中，说好事情或者正常的事情一般都是把别人放在前面，自己放在后面，以表示谦虚。坏事情就相反，要把自己放在前面，别人放在后面，表示责任应该自己承担).They(注意句首字母大写) think he won't have a bright future and worry(这里不是第三人称单数） about me.I don't know what to say to them.I think they won't listen(spelling mistake,I'm willing to believe that it's just a slip of the pen) to me.

Now let's come back to our story.I think it's not necessary to worry too much about what your parents think about your boyfriend.What matters is how both of you react. It's of not use just worrying. It's time to take action. You are still college students,am I right? OK, then you should take you time to improve yourselves in an all-round way, such as improving the skill of communication,you major knowledge, or the philosophy of life. You have to prove to your parents you will live a decent life.