【作文练习1】How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine’s Day? Valentine, going, Chinese, How, spend

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情人节就快到了！所以，本期主题就是她了：
How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine's Day?

祝各位情人节快乐

evaxiaofan

4# 谢

Thanks for your advice, and I think your writng is good.
if you'd like to have a try at this topic, that would be better.

谢

you can keep a diary in English every day . I  think you can improve your writing.

evaxiaofan

2# crystal_09

That day is really special ,it not only makes the lovers sweeter than ever, but also makes more the lovers  

So don't worry, maybe a boy will bravely bare his heart to you

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ah,I think this's day  different of(from) the others

i didn't (won't 可能用将来时会好点哟）spend that day.

crystal_09

ah,I think this's day different of the others

i didn't spend that day.