Practise Writing in English[2011.5.6]保护环境是我们的义务 English, 保护环境

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题目：请以”It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

　　　　It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.
　　
　　But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.

　　　　Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

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　　点评：作者多用学过的词语，不但保证了正确，还巩固了所学的知识，并且注意句型的多样化，如长句、短句、疑问句，使用了“if，so，now，but”等词，整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上，写文章就像串珠子，连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。

议论文常用的句型有：
1、论点：
　　Computer is important.
　　We must learn English well.
　　It's very important for us to...
　　In my opinion...
　　
2、论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅、紧凑。如：
　　Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Lastly, ... Above all, ... 等。
　　
3、结尾强调观点，最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点，如：
　　So we must...
　　So it's very important for us to...
　　I believe...
　　We should...